“The Breaking of the Fellowship”
here I am, foolish
still writing you poetry
long gone though you are
an uncertain waking dream
the first and most painful love
why should I return?
that place is of the past now
I cannot belong
half of an incomplete whole
sun with no earth, earth no moon
to shrink from these wayward thoughts
your ghost my burden
why can you not seek white shores
or haunt the one you’ve become?
Very strong voice here, it conjures up lots of images. I’d love to see this developed further!
Thank you! I’m glad it wasn’t too cliche/cheesy. I’m thinking of writing more on the subject, only it’s like pulling teeth. XD
This is fabulous!!!!
:D Thank you my dear! You ought to get a WP to advertise your own soon to be published work!