“The Breaking of the Fellowship”
–
here I am, foolish
still writing you poetry
long gone though you are
an uncertain waking dream
the first and most painful love
–
why should I return?
that place is of the past now
I cannot belong
half of an incomplete whole
sun with no earth, earth no moon
–
cowardly, perhaps
to shrink from these wayward thoughts
your ghost my burden
why can you not seek white shores
or haunt the one you’ve become?
–
Only Fragments 
Very strong voice here, it conjures up lots of images. I’d love to see this developed further!
Thank you! I’m glad it wasn’t too cliche/cheesy. I’m thinking of writing more on the subject, only it’s like pulling teeth. XD
This is fabulous!!!!
:D Thank you my dear! You ought to get a WP to advertise your own soon to be published work!